Reviews for Searching
insert name here chapter 1 . 3/22/2004
wow, i really like it, great job, u should consider writing a melody to it, this piece definatly has song potential
Frogalog chapter 1 . 3/22/2004
great poem!
i love the way it flows.
good job!
BoldSilence chapter 1 . 3/22/2004
This could definately be a song. I really like the chorus, espcialy this.
"Now I'm sarching for the answers
At the bottom of a bottle
But I'm getting nowhere
My life feels swallowed"
That was a really cool line.
R&R some of my stuff if you will...