this is a great poem! i love the way u use The words "Take my hand" that was just...wow

Oh my gosh! I love this poem! It reminds me of a feary's calling. I'm adding you to my fav authors list. great poem.

Wow, this is amazing. Your descriptions were beautiful! You did such a wonderful job of making the reader feel as if they could feel mist upon their skin or listening to the brook dripping its cool water in their ears. Great job!

Beautiful repetition, not to mention decription.