Reviews for the first time
vish chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
may i ask wat first time this was?
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Really cool poem. I like how it gives you a glimpse of that experience. Only two things critique wise: I would recommend chaning "no long the same" to "longer." Also, this poem makes me wish it were longer. But regardless it flows very well and conveys its meaning properly.
me chapter 1 . 3/23/2004
im glad u feel the same, and i love u.