|Reviews for the first time|
| vish chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
may i ask wat first time this was?
| Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Really cool poem. I like how it gives you a glimpse of that experience. Only two things critique wise: I would recommend chaning "no long the same" to "longer." Also, this poem makes me wish it were longer. But regardless it flows very well and conveys its meaning properly.
| me chapter 1 . 3/23/2004
im glad u feel the same, and i love u.