Reviews for I Died For You
TheUni chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
I die like this every day. It's really to strong for it to be put in words. I think you attempted it nicely though.
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Funsmoke chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
Very thorough treatment of specific emotions. It's good, the repetition, and used to interesting ability. I do believe it's working for you.
Zeedox chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
B-E-A-utiful. The trick of repeating phrases was well preformed, and enlightened the poem. The only thing 'bout it is... uh... sad? Nah, that's just me and my Hollywood-endings. I did also like the way it was describing an event, slowly, but careful.
The poem was wonderful, to say the least. Might not be the best of reviews you'll get, but it was an attempt.
/Zeedox - Wierd reviewer