Reviews for Cassie
Phoenix Phyre chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
Deep. ']
Love and Hearts,
Phoenix
A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
Great rhymes... well done on the meter... keep up the great work...
CaitSpain chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
A couple of syntax changes would make it perfect, methinks. (Talking out my ass. )
However, you still remain the Queen of Poetry and I bow to you.
lostontheroof chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
I absolutley love this poem! It's great, one of the best I've ever read.
Great work!
Arreis Kurai chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
i like the idea behind it...it's really unique, and u worded your poem wickedly
*Arreis Kurai*
Cad chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
Quite sad, a lot of pain is communicated within this poem (obviously) and you do communicate it quite well. My only advice is not for the poem but rather for yourself- do not let that young child die, let her out from time to time, we all need to act like a child occasionaly.
Ayanlu chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
OOh, now this is the stuff I'm talking about.
*drools over the beautiful lines and decently pieces rhythm that makes him want to write a poem himself*
O.o oh, uhmm I mean, good poem.
Death Is Life153 chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
This is so deep I think I might drown.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
aw very sad and symbolic.. I like it a l9ot.. powerful too
Ravynne chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
deep...interesting perspective
CrimsonRosebud chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
Interesting very intersting. I like it though. Good work.
Seras Nova chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
*Tear* Depressing Cassie...and for once I can't really think of advice or whatnot...twas a great poem though. Um...YOU ROCK!
...sorry for the lame review.
Keep writing.
-Seras
K.G. Hollingsworth chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
That's kind of creepy... but quite good as well.
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