THAT WAS GREAT! YOU KNOW HOW TO DESCRIBE THINGS REALLY GOOD!*sorry I was on caps lock lol* Anyway Keep it up!

Touching. There is a lot i can say about this, but at the moment it is half one in the morning and i'm struggling to keep my friggin eyes open, let alone use my Brain! If i were you Sean i wouldn't use it for your monologue. Otherwise it is a good peice of writing. A*