Reviews for Seals, Versailles and Nowhere
tretragsg chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
one tear, one smile, and a marvelous letter! I liked it a lot, continue writting...maybe someday you will get to send it somewhere...until then, keep going!
jackie chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
This was really good. Just one suggestion, spell out all the words completely, don't use "&", write "and", and write "thought" instead of "tho". Maybe it's just me, but I associate things like that with younger, immature writers and usually won't read stories that are written in "chat language". Writing the way you would as if your work was actually being published gives you more credibility. But like a said, this was really good. You have an interesting writing style.