Reviews for From Fire to Water |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hello, i enjoyed your story so far, so i was wondering if it was possible for me to obtain the rest? |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. that was a really good story. different from what i normally read, but still really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. No cameras? That seems...suspicious... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw... We're not friends anymore, remember? I know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() GOOD STORY. |
![]() ![]() you started off weak but gained strength as the story progressed. i love the relationship btwn all the characters. the ending was too sweet. i think u should write a sequel. about all the new couples. if u want. well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully written story. I can tell that it was written nearer to the start of your writing career but I loved it all the same. I think that your build up of their personalities were perfect and while the deaths of certain characters brought me to tears(literally) I completly see how it was necesary in order for the others to progress as they had. Thank you so much for this story it was TOTALLY worth the hours it spent to read it...again thank you for this awesome piece of literatue~Southern |
![]() ![]() ![]() At times I found myself annoyed with Layna, but by the end I was more annoyed with Javion. I don't know what you call a story which gets you upset with both of the main characters, but I would have to go with really good. Thanks for writing this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Darn it. I'm not there. :) Oh well. You look at you reviews, and mine take up a whole page, then some! I guess that's good enough. I love your story, and I can't wait to read your other ones. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this stpry sp much! This is really, really good. With revision, it could get so good- I don't know. Definatly up there with Firebird and Queen of Glass, but you do have some editing to do. Keep writing awesome stories, good plots and wonderful characters. The deaths hit me like rocks- they were really, really well done! Congrats for finishing something as well- I'm not good at that. I love the last sentence, it really just summed everything up. This was a really good story, and I wish you luck with your others. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good for her! Anyways, it's only a year- she's seventeen, right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() She said she wished she could be part of the Flames... she has the Water Warriors instead though, doesn't she? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I do too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweetness! |