|Reviews for Your Jail|
| Zeekie chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
this ones really gr8...i luv the whole metaphor and the idea of it...its stupendous! (sry, cant think of a different word to say other than gr8 and excellent and awesome P )
| Nay and Ayeka chapter 1 . 3/25/2004
Very intriguing metaphor! What an awesome job! The writing style was noticebly different from your last three...but it was beautifully written! What a terrific job you've done with this poem! Keep up with the amazing work!