Reviews for I'd be
Astreah Bathory chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
I like your style of writing and I'm glad to meet a fan of mine. This poem reminds me a lot of 'Anna' and 'Blow a Kiss' It's really good for a 'five minute poem'.
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 3/27/2004
great poem. well written, good use of imagery and repetition. i like this. nice job. keep writing!