|Reviews for Ruined|
| EWindheim chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
Wow...the porcelin world metaphor is really good. The way you expressed how their rage and hate hurt you is very good.
| Anat Qetesh chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
I love the way you use 'porcelain world' id never thought of somehting like that before but it fits so well. great poem, the emotions really shine through in your poems.