Reviews for Sorrowful Memories |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey.. pretty good work you got going on here _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a wonderful poem, so sad...The rhyming is good and the short, broken lines give it a nice sound, really great writing~Lozfairy x~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() It sounds like a new and improved Evanascence song! you should become a song writer! lol! . i likey! *~Happy gave ya cookies~* |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's sad that you have so much that hurts you so deeply, but I think it's wonderful that you have this outlet and the talent to express it. I think that's what drives most people to the breaking point, having so much hurt and no way of expressing it. It's good that you have such a clear way of saying how you feel. Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Same as before, there is potential, but it's written slightly imatureley. |
![]() ![]() ![]() clever rhymes, good rythm, nice style and voice. depressing and deep. i like it. r/r me ~~sg |
![]() ![]() ![]() suicide...ouch...IT'S SO GOOD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great poem! i know exactly how you feel |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow...it's completely amazing i must say. choice of words, the way the lines were, it was pure beauty. thanx for reviewing mine..and keep up your great stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... i love the choice of words abd the way you broke up the lines, good work. Thanks for reviewing mine! |
![]() ![]() depressing.. but so engaging. I was mesmorized by this poem, it's just the way it's written, the rhyme and how you broke up the lines... it just kept me asking for more. Really cool that you have the ability to affect people like that. I loved the poem. Wow. |