Reviews for Perfect
RuathaWehrling chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
Hi there!
First off, thanks so much for all your reviews! Sorry I've been slacking so much on my responses!
Secondly, I really like this poem. The only major thing I'd suggest changing is to add some blank lines between thought-sections. It's sort of hard to read, especially on a computer screen. Beyond that, the only other thing is that "More perfect friends" sounds funny, especially where it is. The next few lines start with "the" or "my", and I'd just advise changing "more" to match them.
:) Well done!
Ruatha
Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 5/20/2004
I guess it looks like veryone who reviewed this so far can relate. Odd... Well, this was very meaningful and a good poem, too.
Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
P.S. Thank you for the review on "Vampyre."
Saiai chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
Aw...I understand. I feel that way too.
just a ray of sunshine chapter 1 . 3/26/2004
I really liked it. Very... well, poetic. Kind of reminds me of my life, you know?