Reviews for Afraid
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/5/2004
ah loved! i love this poem. so true
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 3/28/2004
I know what ya mean. Well put. I like it a lot.
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Debbirooni chapter 1 . 3/28/2004
Wow... I like the title: "Afraid"... yeah, I'm afraid to tell people how I feel about them too... no matter if it's true...
Did you write this with anyone in mind?
Well... I like this poem... you really capture what people are afraid of if you tell them your secret... whether or not if it's that you "love" them...
Good job!
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 3/27/2004
I like this... "I'm afraid to need you," great line. Bravo.
tranCendenZ chapter 1 . 3/27/2004
i'm not really sure...i guess the poem (the other one) is fine as it is..i'm just in the mood for something a little more upbeat lol so maybe i'm taking it as a little more bland than it really is