Reviews for sinner saint
Vyvyan chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
Wow...lovely and moving, yet haunted.
utopian sky chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
wow, that is amazing. they really do complement each other perfectly. hauntingly beautiful.
Ed Girl chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
creative way of putting this together
it reminds me of something out of anne rice and the alluring seduction of a female vampire
IHJ chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
Yes, they do compliment each other and it's well intertwined. You don't quite know if she was the sinner or saint, but from the words, I'd say sinner and he was the saint, the angel, so to say who fell for an evil soul.
Well-written and I'm sorry for your friend's (?) death.
Izzy J.
Sara Bickley chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
Sad and beautiful - it's eerie how well the two parts mesh together.
Val Mora chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
...I really don't understand it, but it's really pretty. From context, it might seem that a particularly wonderful lady ended up killing a guy who was in love with her, but I doubt that's what happened to your friend.
It's very pretty, though. I like this poem.
breakdown in the waiting room chapter 1 . 4/2/2004
I LOVE THIS-would you think about developing it into a longer poem?
-Jessica
Tempest Breeze chapter 1 . 3/27/2004
i liked how you combined these two together. otherwise the haiku would not have been nearly as strong but as it is its very good
CW-nerd-12 chapter 1 . 3/27/2004
This is neat. You should try writing a renga, which is an Asian form for two voices.