Reviews for Never Been Kissed |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't reveiw this chapter or the 2nd chapter last time so I'm doing it now. GREAT JOB AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON! _ _ _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I WANNA SEE WUT HAPPENS! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! you updated! hmm...what can i say? this story is really 'fascinating'. _ -[Pre-Used] Soul |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's really good, update soon _ ~Fish |
![]() ![]() ![]() vERY GOOD! all i can say is KEEP GOING! PLZ UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very cute, kinda sad too...poor gal.. well, update soon! |
![]() ![]() yay i like this story i also like how quickly you seem to update i hate waiting for updates i think my waiting record is 4 years and going... i like the characters and i could see myself writing a character analisis for anyone of them include the dad. the first time you discribed her family it sounded alittle well... cliche' but i gott tell you, you worked your way out of it into something greater. instead of just being a abusive father he had an alcohol proble related to her mother walking out. that was a mouthful. anyway i think the mother is setting herself up for a guest apprence... just kidding! that really would be chiche' anyway great job. keep writting -Mouse64 |
![]() ![]() Hey, this story reminds me of the story "wallflower" You should check it out. Yours is pretty good so far, you might wanna make longer chapters thougoh. Just a suggestion. Keep up the good work! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi. really like yor story so far! you hafta continue! Please? -[Pre-Used] Soul |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good staring_ i like it, please update soon. ~Fish |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, I like the dark humour at the end, and yes, please write more, it'd be interesting to see how her life goes. |