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Reviews for
LA Brawl
Neechi
chapter 1 .
4/10/2004
I don't know why I'm bothering to review when I'm F*ing pissed off at you, you big fat jerk. P
I'll comment later. Ja
Paichi Hakubi
chapter 1 .
4/5/2004
This is damn good. Sounds like it's going to be an awesome action story. I hope you do more work on it!