|Reviews for Broken Glass|
| Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
that was seriously EXCELLENT. it was far better than the original. i thought it had a perfect rythm, structure, it flowerd really well so ignore the other person. it truly was beautiful
| Hangman chapter 1 . 3/28/2004
That is possibly your best poem, the others Im not too sure about. Theyre a little simplistic and (with all due respect) empty. This one is quite descriptive and well written. The only thing I can suggest is that you make sure your poems are consistent. For example, this one's rhyming is fine its just the structure doesnt keep a steady rythm. The others Ive read have some stanza's that rhyme and some that dont and its all a little inconsistent. Your work is good, but as I have probably said a thousand times to a few people, it needs more polish.
| SeaVoi chapter 1 . 3/28/2004
I like this, it leaves a "mist" lol, I know that sounds weird but it does, very good. Thanx for the review!