|Reviews for Memento Mori|
| ChristianGeekGuy chapter 1 . 5/5/2004
Hurrah, a title. It sounds cool, even though I don't know how it relates yet.
You still have "It never ceased to amaze Anthony how well the man's English was." - should be "how good", since good is an adjective (modifies nouns) and well is an adverb (mods verbs). Other than that, it's quite polished.
You've got a good prologue that sets up two characters and gets right into the meat of the story. Only one question - Why haven't you updated it yet? I'm almost caught up on reviews, so post something or I'll have to go to the front page to find something to read! :)