Reviews for All Play and No Work |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Worth Reading. Is there any latest works from this author? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. Absolutely loved it. :) |
![]() ![]() Leah fucking pisses me off so much oh my god. If i had a sister that broke my fucking toes and punched me with crutches I'd fucking tell somebody! Ugh Blair what is wrong with you? This is making me so mad i can't even. But other than that its a really good story! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a pretty good story. Of course, I'm not from London or England, so there were a few technicalities I didn't quite understand. I really liked a lot of your characters. They were well-developed, and your plot was great, too. Keep writing; you're good at it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() To be honest, this does seem more like Pippa rather than Blair. I think Pippa's a little more lovable because she's a little more down to earth. I think a friend who's as supportive as Eddie would be a great one to have. I really liked this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, I found a mistake that probably isn't one. This chapter was cute. I liked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was pretty cute. I noticed a few mistakes, but I kind of liked this chapter. Though I'm not sure if I like the way this happened, a few issues were resolved, and that sort of helped the story move along a little bit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This cliff hanger makes me wonder if that means that Blair is going to make something up. I liked this chapter. It was cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder why Blair's family doesn't think it's very suspicious that Leah isn't there to be with her injured little sister. I kind of like the pace of Blair's and Matt's relationship. It seems natural for them. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was very dramatic, but mostly in a positive way. At least Matt will have an idea now. I do have a tip for you: normally, periods and commas go inside of quotations and apostrophes. This chapter was still really good, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That kiss was actually very unexpected. I didn't imagine Matt being the kind of person to do that... There were a few formatting problems, but they were only missing spaces between words. There was also a missing "you," but I liked this chapter nonetheless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Matt's very perceptive. I liked this chapter, though you did misspell "reminder" as "reminded" when Matt was helping Blair sit up after she fainted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Licia's little surprise was rather shocking, considering she's only been mentioned in passing for the last few chapters or so. I wonder if someone's going to find out about Leah this time... I don't think so. At least, not just yet. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I found an extra apostrophe, but this chapter was still written well. I'm kind of wondering when Leah will return... I don't think Blair's problems with her are going to be resolved if no one catches her, and I know Leah's not going to stop. This chapter was still really good. |