Reviews for When A Traitor Falls In Love
spidey waz here 10 min ago chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
pretty interesting.
write more.
ladyevelynnanate
shyXshortieXbabe chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
hm interesting story. It's really unique actually, and original too. Very nice. keep up the good work!
chibichan366 chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
hey!
nice story! i wonder wat's gonna happen next. very good usage of "old"words like "blasphemous." i like the way you started out the story with the description of your character and i really like the way how u stated very clearly at the first sentence how she was the traitor.
overall, excellent chapter one, u've made it very clear to the reader about ur characters and their goals so that there won't be any guessing near the climax of the story.
i also have just written a fic (my first fic) called "Indifference" and i would really like it if u check it out and perhaps, give me some tips.
thanks! continue with the good work. i can tell it's gonna be very interesting.
chibichan366