Reviews for Sad, Sad, Perfection
Blank1379 chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
Exactly! This is what I've been trying to tell my parents. :) (sighs) When will they learn?
Bleedingtree chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
but then even to be so imperfect. some then think it's better to be dead too.
suey and liuey chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
great... love the line ' to be what cannot be' but im not sure about the ending though...seems so abrupt.
xzerinieah chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
That is so true. This poem is nicely done, good job.
hauntingtheliving chapter 1 . 3/31/2004
I like it.. keep up the good work.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
very true... very powerful too
Brandy Bear chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
perfection is something that we will always want but will never really have because nobody can be perfect no matter how hard they try. good poem
BrandyBear
daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 3/28/2004
Very powerful. As always, I love your work. Great job. :o)