Reviews for The one thing
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
ah yes.. this is similar to my poem.. nicely done
born-again chapter 1 . 12/15/2004
I wish i could say how much i love this poem but i lack the vocabulary. Perfect.
Jade Silver chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
This is very well done; it conveys the emotions of need and love. Good job!
~jade silver~
Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 5/20/2004
It seems to be a proven thing, you always desire the one thing you just can't have. I hope somehow this does work out for you though. Good poem.
~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
P.S. Thank you for the review on "Drowning". I'm glad to hear the repetition didn't bother you too much.
shawn4542 chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
I know how you feel. You find yourself wrapped up in a person so much, but you can't have them. They're just out of reach. Then you think maybe in another lifetime. . .
Well i really like this i'm going to read your other one
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
God can actually feel the pain its awful! Great poem though. Why is it heartbreak does that? Thats so passionate I love it! especially with the sudden mood change. Well done.
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 3/28/2004
Hm. Strong. I like it. You convey your emotions well.
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The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King