Reviews for The one thing
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
ah yes.. this is similar to my poem.. nicely done
born-again chapter 1 . 12/15/2004
I wish i could say how much i love this poem but i lack the vocabulary. Perfect.
Jade Silver chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
This is very well done; it conveys the emotions of need and love. Good job!
jade silver
Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 5/20/2004
It seems to be a proven thing, you always desire the one thing you just can't have. I hope somehow this does work out for you though. Good poem.
Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
P.S. Thank you for the review on "Drowning". I'm glad to hear the repetition didn't bother you too much.
shawn4542 chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
I know how you feel. You find yourself wrapped up in a person so much, but you can't have them. They're just out of reach. Then you think maybe in another lifetime. . .
Well i really like this i'm going to read your other one
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
God can actually feel the pain its awful! Great poem though. Why is it heartbreak does that? Thats so passionate I love it! especially with the sudden mood change. Well done.
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 3/28/2004
Hm. Strong. I like it. You convey your emotions well.
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The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King