|Reviews for A Waste|
| Naede chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
Did your girlfriend/boyfriend break up with you is that y ur so depressed? im really sorry if she/he did. the reason i put he/she is because i dont know if your a guy or girl i have the feeling your a guy but i never know
| Hangman chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
Nice poem, you seem to write about 6 a day and you have an awe-inspiring list of poems, but I get the feeling that not that much thought goes into them and that you seemingly write about anything. I may be wrong, but the poems dont seem to have much of an effect on me (I say this because poems are supposed to inspire or make you feel something) and you churn out a LOT, but this one was nice, and you have a few golden ones, I dont mean to offend you or anyone else here, but if I am partly right, you should consider going over your poems more thoroughly and making sure you really care about the subject matter. If you care to email me to comment my email is thats also my msn addy.