Reviews for Too Far
Roadside Dryer chapter 6 . 3/29/2004
Crappy! What is it with you and making people die! (don't feel bad, i've done that too) Nice. If you made it longer and not so sudden it'd be really good.
Roadside Dryer chapter 5 . 3/29/2004
Thank god! Finally a chapter isn't so sudden!
Roadside Dryer chapter 4 . 3/29/2004
WAY TO SUDDEN! I can understand that he would get mad but take his life? NO WAY!
Roadside Dryer chapter 3 . 3/29/2004
confusing. Still the how did they know each other so well thing and now it the oh so sudden robbery.
Roadside Dryer chapter 2 . 3/29/2004
Okay, that was really sudden. Is Bryan kind of the ladies man and just gos for it when he sees some one. You said that she had been eyeing him, that doesn't mean that they know each other-work on that.
Roadside Dryer chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
Interesting, I'll keep reading.