Reviews for Jogging
Amora Elvenstar chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
Should I show this to Josh? You know he'll love it. Great job. You're really good at this type of writing. Do more, they work for you.
David chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
Is this a haiku? It's not bad.
Emerald Wings chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
no make is grammatically correct there-unless you specifically want to go with non-standard grammer :)
i see squirrels...:-D
soulwings chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
Nice. Maybe change "make" to "makes"? Other than that it's nice. :p