Reviews for news
Kelpylion chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
I think everyone knows this feeling. Very appropriate simile for the concept of headlines.
godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
Brilliant. I know that feeling exactly, you've captured it-brilliantly. Your four lines say a lot more than many long-winded political poems. Great great great.
lyv
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
Hey .. and it is ALMOST an acrostic! almost spells out HALT ! hee hee!
but I totally agree! the news is bs propganda. Sounds crazy, right? The truth shall set you free!
hm ... acrositc sonnet, huh? I may have t olook into that! MWA-HAHAHA! I'l have to remind myslef as to how to WRITE a sonnet! I would need a name with the proper number of lines, right?
*wow, that IS crazy! hee hee!*
I need my muse back!
great poem! what kind is it?