Reviews for I See Deceit
Vanillack4 chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
Your sitting here telling everyone to "open your eyes and look far beyond the sky" But have you?
Weapon chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
That was nice... I do have one question though, what did you mean in the line: But don't turn humble those hands to me.? What do bhuddists do? Sorry, but I can't figure it out. You make some very good points though. Making one's own decisions and sticking to them leads to strength, unlike the willingness to be led, or the fighting to stay by yourself. What you said about a middle way... Is that bhuddism, or zen? I'll look it up, but really, you made a good point. It struck a chord. Anyway, happy writing!
Also, contrary to popular belief, I wrote those poems last year, but remembered them today.