Very nice. Seems like something I can relate to. Love the words you used. Very powerful and it holds emotion. Loved it. Ja Ne.

Verra nice indeed! I would like to compliment you on your excellent rhyming skills, it makes this poem so much more powerful. Keep going!

really good! i can relate to this and it's really good...it flows and rhymes nicely and gets the point across...sad point, but realistic, too. keep it up

this is a very good poem; very relatable and understanding-able. very good.