|Reviews for The Pawn and Her Castlekeep|
| RainbowDancer chapter 8 . 2/23/2008
Finally, a story which is original and an author who can write well. It deserves a place on my favorites list. Good luck! -S.
| Cam S chapter 4 . 4/13/2004
Wow...I thought you said you weren't good at action sequences?
This one is pretty good, and I like the way you made the scuttlers-enemies that adapt like that are usually really creepy.
| Cam S chapter 3 . 4/6/2004
A good story (wish I knew the name of that shadow creature-it seems really interesting.) You've got a real gift for imagery.
I will AIM you with more comments later; Java class calls.
| Cam S chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
I'll read more and leave a more complete review later-I'm in Java Class, right now.
I like this story. There isn't much here, but you're hinting at a lot (which is quite good)-so you've either got a good plan for this, or you're very good at tricking me into thinking that.
I like the characters, so far, there is the traditional adolescent paranoia, as well as some odd premonitionary things.
I like it.