Firstly, I think that this concept should make for an interesting story. It's nice to see a fanfic about a girl who isn't all sugary sweet. I also enjoy how Ritsu isn't exactly the nicest girl, and how she jumps to conclusions about people she doesn't know, seeing as this leaves a lot of room for character development.

Orange hair...the wink...popular...Hiro Sarashina!? If so, high five. Otome Games for life.

Where is the next one?
I can see that the last time you updated was years ago, so where is the next chapter?

Kei reminds me of Creed from the Black Cat manga.

That was certainly unexpected.
I did not think the story would go that way at all.
It is usually a good thing when the story runs away. It tends to make the story better.

Oh my.
Because of many things.

Good timing.

I like the song.

Even if you are I like Hiro-san.
That might be because he looks different. I tend to like characters who are unusual.
I found the bit where Ritsu-san hit Mazaki-san (that was his name right?) with the dictionary entertaining.

Did you take some of this from Fruits Basket?

I kinda like the lyric. Don't worry, I think the song isn't corny at all.

Awwww... With just one chapter and I already like Hiro already.

Wow...
This seems interesting, I'll be reading the next chapter.

BUT I LIKE HANA KIMI! *uke corner*

still love the story, though!

*uke corner again*

OMG ITS KYO! (btw love it!)