Reviews for Average Girl
Poyupyu chapter 1 . 5/14
Firstly, I think that this concept should make for an interesting story. It's nice to see a fanfic about a girl who isn't all sugary sweet. I also enjoy how Ritsu isn't exactly the nicest girl, and how she jumps to conclusions about people she doesn't know, seeing as this leaves a lot of room for character development.
TooLazyToLogin chapter 1 . 1/6
Orange hair...the wink...popular...Hiro Sarashina!? If so, high five. Otome Games for life.
Iceleaf chapter 17 . 11/20/2012
Where is the next one?
I can see that the last time you updated was years ago, so where is the next chapter?
Iceleaf chapter 13 . 11/19/2012
Kei reminds me of Creed from the Black Cat manga.
Iceleaf chapter 12 . 11/19/2012
That was certainly unexpected.
I did not think the story would go that way at all.
It is usually a good thing when the story runs away. It tends to make the story better.
Iceleaf chapter 11 . 11/19/2012
Oh my.
Because of many things.
Iceleaf chapter 8 . 11/19/2012
Good timing.
Iceleaf chapter 3 . 11/18/2012
I like the song.
Iceleaf chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
Even if you are I like Hiro-san.
That might be because he looks different. I tend to like characters who are unusual.
I found the bit where Ritsu-san hit Mazaki-san (that was his name right?) with the dictionary entertaining.
Iceleaf chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Did you take some of this from Fruits Basket?
Reia Scarler chapter 3 . 7/31/2012
I kinda like the lyric. Don't worry, I think the song isn't corny at all.
Reia Scarler chapter 2 . 7/31/2012
Awwww... With just one chapter and I already like Hiro already.
Reia Scarler chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
This seems interesting, I'll be reading the next chapter.
AmatureAuthor chapter 12 . 1/2/2011
BUT I LIKE HANA KIMI! *uke corner*

still love the story, though!

*uke corner again*
AmatureAuthor chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
OMG ITS KYO! (btw love it!)
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