hey i just read through this story and i love it

i really thought jake was dead then bam hes alive lol

neways i love it and hope u update soon

I was really excited about this story when I saw that you had reviewed. I loved the update cant wait till the next chapter!

oh wow. its been such a long time since you updated, so I had thought that you would never finish it. I havent read this story in quite some time, but i remember it was one of my favorites.

I am always bad to recognize writing style changes, so I can comment on that.

good luck! (and keep updating)

LOVE IT.

So far so good! The ending was weak as another reviewer has already said. To bad you havn't posted a new chapter because the story was just getting good. Please keep up the good work!

So he's really dead. Nothing is going to happen? Its been nearly 2 months! WAA

OMG! i cant believe that happened. it was so sad! i hope you update soon because your a really good writer and the story is great!

please add more chapters! please! the story was so good you need to add more. and if you are or aren't going to add more then post a chapter that is really just an authors note telling us that more is coming in due time. please! the story can't just die like this. you have so much to work off of! please please please please please please please please please add more chapters!

i do not think that jack is going to die. he cant!

YOU NEED TO UPDATE!

I know i havent reviewed every single chapter, but ill try and make this one realy really long! Oh my god i really liked this story alot, not just liked but loved this story, u really know how to make sumthing seem realistic! When i was reading this story everything seemed real, every single part of the story even the sexual parts 'hm :)'! Im hapy that Jack and Sarah got together, but yeah it was bad they got together when Sarah and Brian were going out, but atleast they told Brian the whole truth, im really glad they did that! o that freakin dog, just had to run in the middle of the street, :'(, ooh i dont like that dog, he killed Jack and his parents on the day of graduation,well i wud still be mad at the dog if it wasnt even graduation day, but ya know wut i mean, o, im so sad now, Sarah, and her friends are losing Brian, cuz of those big, wanna be good-looking, they think their tough j*a*, oh :-I, im gona hurt those guys that hurt jack, sarah, brian,scott,jeremy, and the rest of their friends!, now Brian is dying, and Jack is dead, or supposedly dead, i wish Brian would recover fromt he tumor,and Jack is found alive, so everyone lives,and everyone lives happily ever after! Please write more u r truly a talented writer please write more, Catherine

hurry! u have 2 write more soon! u can't leave the story like this! we will all be waiting 4 the next chapter!

he didnt die, really, did he!

hey! WHY AREN'T U UPDATING? ! I AM SO DISAPPOINTED IT IS NOT UR USUAL STANDARD...IS IT? HOPE U CAN UPDATE *SOON*

Hmm..MISSING BODY EH? *hint hint* *wink wink* I'm thinking Jack is gonna have to come back sometime soon...b/c...killing off main characters has to be in the top ten of REALLY BIG NO-NOs for writing...:/ Hopefully you know that. Anyway...REALLY REALLY GOOD STORY! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE!