Reviews for Ordered To die
Kaguara chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
i love this poem! It has great depth that i can never add to my poetry. maybe because i don't always like what i'm writing. hm...i must think on this...Ne way keep writing!
Hangman chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
Nice poem, its more powerful than your other works. I honestly have no idea how you can come up with so many poems so quickly. Maybe you dont mean them, maybe you do, Im not to judge. This is a nice poem, however the structure is a bit messy, I was in a kind of steady rhyming and then I went all over the place around the end. Thats the only fault, good work!
Deathsythe chapter 1 . 3/31/2004
Ah, pretty good. I just don't see how so many other poets are able to think so abstractly. All my poetry is easy and flows well, I guess it's pretty good for someone without any training or classes, yet my stuff seems very simplistic compared to poems like this.
But anyway, very good poem, I guess you're talking about a kid being drafted huh? Very good, makes you think.
Keep up the good work.
Ja ne
"You think so too right?"