Reviews for like a Heart Clamp
Balthasaar chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
Nice poem, good use of imagery, especially the crucifixtion referece. I'm still undecided whether there's an uderlying current of self loathing or whether it's just me.
Balthasaar
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
you're neat
lacking motivation chapter 1 . 3/31/2004
at least you can claim effort. more than me. but i love the last two lines, they make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. oh and by the way what is triloblastic?