Reviews for Broken Dreams
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
truly disturbing.
nice.
pandaluv11 chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
Very good. I liked this one, and the rhyming was good. I can never ryhme. *pouts* But the topic was a good one to address. And thanks for your review on my story. I appreciate it.
Raven Gray chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
if i were her i would have bopped him one!i loved your style rhyming and rythem keep up the good work
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
hey! i liked this poem...even though the ending seems to be hanging...why don't you try closing it w/ something such as "broken dreams, life isn't quite what it seems" or something like that just to sum it up...unless you meant for it to end that way...by the way thanks for all the feedback you've provided on my poems and thanks for sharing your work with the world also...happy writing and publishing!
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
This is an important issue. I love the descriptions and I'm glad that you werote it. Well done.
PS: I finished the acrostic on your pen name..and it is posted if you want to check it out.
Leo chapter 1 . 4/2/2004
That is a good issue no "man" should ever strike a woman and if he does she should leave good message!