Reviews for Make Believe
InfiniteDreamer04 chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
Wow! this was written by a nine year old? it was cute at first, and then, when i read it again, it was deep. You find life interesting, but its not your life. its make believe. living in a falsehood you think is real. Two thumbs up to your niece. She has great talent. Encourage her to keep writing. :)
me3gogi chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
wow. how sweet! of you, and of her. i like it, it has good imagery, and is increadably cute and sweet, in that random childlike way. give her my compliments.
A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
This is so cute... That kid has some potential... I have seen older people on this site write just like her... tell her it's excellent...
Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
I think this is actually VERY beautiful. I'm seriously going to maybe print this off if you give me permission to do that with some of your work. I bet she gets her talent from you.
Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
P.S. Thank you for the review on chapter 6.
star-rokina chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
This is so cute! It sounds like you niece is talking to a butterfly.
BLOUWHO chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
i wish i could write like you do ...hey i uploaded another poem go and read it right now or else
DragonSlayerAV chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
Very cryptic, and original. Great poem!
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
Neat. I like it.
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The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King