Reviews for Bath
Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
that was, cliche as it is, magical. that poem was really intense, and described things just wonderfully, it really did feel magical.
Arden Alloran chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
Very cool. Keep writing.
Deathsythe chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
Ok, I just don't get this one at all. Are you burning or drowning? Or boiling yourself? Then I thought it could be both, like in Napalm or something but, no, you said 'water' so I'm very confused.
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
A little dark, but beautifully done..i love the reference to lace...very creative.