Nice, interesting, well rounded story.
You described that beast creature well, and I felt that the story had a lot of empathy, I guess. Well done 8/10

hey awsome story hangman i think your on your way to being a writer very descriptive keep it up

Your descriptions are great! They don't go overboard or too far like mine tend to do, and therre wasn't going off tract. It was pure imagery and saddness... In an awfully gory way. But I suppose I have no right to complain, I've never had piano lessons, lol.

incredably! great Story! Quite gory, but awsome. i look forward to an update.

Oh. Oh, see now I feel stupid, because I completely failed to get that the start of the story was the bit that happened after the end - which makes no sense, but you know what I mean. Anyway. I like it more now that I've worked that out.

that's such a sad story, but very good description. i like it a lot.