Reviews for Sleeze
Lux's Confusion chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
thanks to the gods, i've found a poet on this page with some edge. I've always been attracted to the vipers, spitting venom, an ego a mile wide. what a breath of fresh air.

-Jasmine
Qu33n of Spades chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
Hey, I like it! woot!
MistrissD chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
Ah, so awesome, I love the italics thrown in, so creative, the ending is awesome too, much loves
Escapist chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
Swanky. I like how the last stanza breathes a bit of insight into the rest of the poem.
"Hike your skirt up and
Smear the lipstick
And oh that wall is cold."
s.o.s chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
I like it. I like it a lot. Reminds me of me..
sweetadeline chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
I absolutely love this. Anyone without the comprehension would call it degrading or something..but it is so absolutely on point, I love it. Thank you for the review, and that is a wonderful name for a cat! Elliott has been this driving force for me..even in death. Every night, I look at this huge poster I have of him, and I just smile..I full heartedly hope that he is doing well..wherever he is. You have much talent..thanks again.
IpsoFacto chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
M. Yeah, I get that. Know how it goes and goes, and I hate knowing 'cause I know too much and I'm on overload. Sleeze is ever-present in my 'life', such as it is.
Eulogy of the Scorned chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
Sensual. Addictive. Fast. Flowing. Sounds almost desired. I like it.