O, I loved this one too. "The oceans that are crying, volcanoes full of ire,The greenery that's dying, and a streetcar named Desire."THAT WAS THE AWESOMEST LINE. This has a million different hidden meanings that are really up to the reader to decipher, or at least that's what I'm getting from it. Very cool.

O.o Awesome! I loved the rhythm - I was actually bobbing my head to it, lol - and everything else - word choice, flow, rhyme - is spot on perfect. Excellent poem _

Hee-hee. I don't get your poem, but it sounds good. And I'm not sure why, but it makes me want to laugh. I think thats a good thing.
So, I think your poem is a bit weird, but it sounds like a real poem, you know, like one of those poems that are really deep and you don't get it but you like it anyways. Very interesting. Smashing job!

awesome poem. well written, nice rhyming and rhythm, the poem has a good flow to it and the repetition works well with this piece. i like how you capitalized Desire, Despair, Melancholy, Unfair, Defeat, Deception, Retreat, and Nature. it has a good effect, almost personifying them. anyway, this is insightful, i like it a lot. great job!

Nicely done. I didn't see anything wrong with it, so good job.