*sigh* i truly love your stories they are so well written and they touch my heart. you are definitely one of my favorite writers.

Incredible story. Heh. I stopped midway through and started wondering why everyone was so against them when it finally clicked. Teehee it was a really cute story. I loved it.

Aww, that was so sweet!

"I love you, Dave."

That line, well, it made me kinda surprised, an unexpected event, but hey, it was a good one! _ If only there were more stories like this...

This is beautiful. Well-written, sweet, and most importantly very real. Very well executed; when you are reading this story, it doesn't matter what kind of people Sam and the speaker are. They could be a man and a woman, two men, or two purple aliens with three arms each. All you want for them is happiness and contentment and the opportunity to be together. That kind of empathy for characters is important for the readers to have-wonderful job executing it. I'm very impressed.

Thank you for sharing this,Nimue

This was absolutely beautiful,The words i wanted to put down here down seem strong enough to tell you how amazing this way you write, there isnt much detail, but it's like i'm watching some sort of television show in my for sharing :3

omg! that wuz so awesome! i started out thinking it was a girl, but little by little i realized it wuz a dude! very well writen! _

Um...interesting. At some parts, I was utterly confused...but by the end it all made sense. Eventually.

What I really liked about this one shot was that after we found out the truth, I actually wanted to go back and reread the fic so that I could catch all those little clues. Anywho, nice job!

Wow...that was really well done! I loved the understated-ness (?) of it all...amazing job. I thought it was a girl, but then you added all those subtle hints, and I felt myself drawing conclusions about the story...VERY nicely done! Keep up the great work!

hey there! i just wanted to say that THAT was one of the best STORIES i've ever read.. it was trite... but you made it sound so... GREAT! I LOVE IT! is this just a one shot thing? i hope u make more...

Oh my god That was a VERY well written story. How you put everything was perfect. I thought Dave was a not-so pretty girl. Wow. I'm sure you've gotten these words a lot. I loved this story! The end makes you grin really wide. Or at least it did for me :3 It's a wonderful short story!

Thank you for allowing me to finally read something here that wasn't a poorly written cliche. It's been a while since I came across something good. I really really liked this story. I loved how you didn't spell out their relationship for us in the beginning. I didn't catch on until the family in the restaurant. The hostile hostess didn't tip me off. It almost makes me wish that you took out the "dave" at the end, because by that point we all know what's going on. The story is so subtle and unique, and I felt like the dave kind of stuck out too much if that makes any sense. Besides that, I loved it.

wow... nicely written! now it all makes sense... i was thinking after nince years why didn't they get married haha so sad that society still doesn't accept these kind of things..

Wow. That was a very differnt ending. Sweet. i like it. It was so unexpeted! Anyway good work.

storywritergirl xoxo

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i think the smile just about sums it up. it was great.

That wasd great! I would have never guessed that they were gay! Usually storis with gays having a romance seemed okay but not really great. But this story really caught my attention and held it. You kill!