|Reviews for Chosen|
| Rocky G chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
Wow this is an excellent poem. Great descriptions, I enjoyed reading your work.
| Til chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
hey, that was so great, in an odd kinda way. i'd give it a 15/10. no, that's not a typo. Til : )
| Asagao chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
I like it. It's simple, but there are so many underlying emotions... maybe I'm perceiving things that aren't there. I mean, 1:00 in the morning... it's hard to feel anything that late...
Thank you for such encouraging reviews on my stuff! You make me feel special. _
| Rachel Faith A. Teknoman 333 chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
*glares in a friendly way*
You make me feel like such a bad writer with this, Jake!
I think that says what I think of this and all your other poems/stories.
| Breaking Heart chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
maybe she does exist...let me know if she has a friend?
your irish lover
| Wrathful Diana chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
I don't quite understand this, but I still like the poem. Neat style
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
nice use of quotes and format.
| vanburen chapter 1 . 5/6/2004
It's 3:28 A.M. and I am taking a study break...anyway, I'm kinda woozy, so this won't be the best review.
Liked the conversational approach
Loved the last line. Don't know why, it just kind of brought everything together into a nice package.
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
Aw, that's sweet!
| Layla737 chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
think it might've been a tad more connected if it rhymed, but hey, that's just me
still good though
| Pixie in a Birdcage chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
Aw are so fucking sweet. *kisses* I am so happy for any girl who marries you. (as long as I'm one of the bride's maids. CUZ IF I'M NOT...!)
| karmakaze chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
Hehe, it's sweet. I like it.
| Luscinia chapter 1 . 4/2/2004
I Love the ending. "Candid, Special, Mine." Hee Hee. Sorry, I'm odd. Anywho, I like how its a whole story in just a couple of lines. Its good.
| DHABUZ chapter 1 . 4/2/2004
i like this poem