Great story

(eyes widens) That was so awesome! Although I do have this problem: "Nightmare's." That's "nightmare is" or it's possessive, or whatever it is, but it's "nightmares."
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A child changes from white, to grey, to black! Awesome. What can I say? But at the end, if it's "..." then it'll be better, in MY POV.
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Awesome! Can I stop saying that word?
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Lolz.
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Julia.

Wooh, powerful, mecaphoral. Makes you think. Makes me want to read more of what you've wrote.