Reviews for Hannah, of Mars |
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![]() ![]() although this story was about the typical rebel girl stuck in the suburbs who happens to meet a hot bad boy...it was still different than the other cliches. i liked it. after u update ur "lucky" story perhaps a sequel for this would be good? loved it. -Noodle |
![]() ![]() hannah's circumstances remind me of my own. not the interesting love interest of course, but the moving from detroit to the boring "predictable" suburbs. like it so far... |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah, I know you wrote this ages ago, and this is actually me re-reading this... but I think it's adorable and sweet. Not shallow-adorable, just adorable. Very nice. And uplifting. We. :3 -Amos |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh shit! i want a guy like that! not really that many here in san francisco. maybe wannabee's but not the real thing. and i don't feel like going to small cities to look for some. i'm fine here in the big city. man. i want a guy like that for real though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. i bet you he's part of her imagination. no but that can't be. cause then her mom saw her. uugh. i'm so glad my mom is not like that. i have seven piercings on both ears. haha. and she went with me to get it done. or maybe that's cause of the fact that my mom is crazy like me too. |
![]() ![]() bittersweer- just because of the cliffhanger ending!But i liked it. It re-enforces the 'don't judge a book by it's cover' lesson in a demonstration of a practical situation- life, and love. Thank you for the story! *bookworm |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is awesome! it's not your typical story nor is it long but it is really great!Crash is so cool. i think i love him...j/k. great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() really cute. I wish there was more. You really write well, i think i said that in my other review, but oh well. I hope you eventually post more stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...WHAT? THIS CAN'T BE THE END! ITS TOO GOOD! THERE HAS TO BE AN EPILOUGE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() RICK IS A JERK! ... Okay, I'm reading on now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Need I say that, even though I haven't finished this yet, I absolutley LOVE your story? Where are all the rest of these reviews? Ah, oh well, TIME TO READ ON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What? That's it? Not even an epilogue. Well, it was a really, really good story:) ~lily~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, man. That is supposed to tide me over? I wanna know what Crash has to say! This is really good. I am so into your story, and I hope you get more up as soon as you can! ~La Diosa~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done. I like the character interaction. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works. / |
![]() ![]() ![]() M... it's good, as always. I want some Crash/ Hannah ACTION! *sniff* This stuff is way too sad and depressing for me. I don't know how much longer i can take it. Oh well, Great lovely chapter and story. Update for me soon! _ ~Fallen Fantasist |