|Reviews for pieces|
| Toxic.Industrial.Waste chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
"you fell off your
bike scraped your
knee until no skin was left
and then you said
is that all
that lies inside me?"
What a powerful ending!
I love twisted metaphors. Angst & Truth.
| Kiyoko Usagi chapter 1 . 1/29/2007
I like the last verse "you're there" the best. I liked the images you described and how you worded everything together.
| nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
Hmm, unusual imagery for such ideas... the thoughts themselves arn't origional but this brings it new- life? Anyway needless to say: keep writing.
Stones decay, words lastNick
PS: You should turn these into separate chapters.
| Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Interesting pieces, your imagery is quite unusual and refreshing, I like the way these are open to many different interpretations.
| ezyret chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
wow. this means something different to me than it does to you, I bet! I'd be very curious to hear you interpretation of this poem sometime...
| L neils chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
poetry isn't really my thing (school has failed me - i've learned nothing about it) but i like this. it's odd, but so... good. hell, i'm shithouse at reviews.
*btw, i put up a new story i'd like for you to read, 'where to begin'.