Reviews for pieces
Toxic.Industrial.Waste chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
"you fell off your

bike scraped your

knee until no skin was left

and then you said

is that all

that lies inside me?"

What a powerful ending!

I love twisted metaphors. Angst & Truth.


Erica Sky
Kiyoko Usagi chapter 1 . 1/29/2007
I like the last verse "you're there" the best. I liked the images you described and how you worded everything together.
nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
Hmm, unusual imagery for such ideas... the thoughts themselves arn't origional but this brings it new- life? Anyway needless to say: keep writing.

Stones decay, words lastNick

PS: You should turn these into separate chapters.
Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Interesting pieces, your imagery is quite unusual and refreshing, I like the way these are open to many different interpretations.
ezyret chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
wow. this means something different to me than it does to you, I bet! I'd be very curious to hear you interpretation of this poem sometime...
L neils chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
poetry isn't really my thing (school has failed me - i've learned nothing about it) but i like this. it's odd, but so... good. hell, i'm shithouse at reviews.
*btw, i put up a new story i'd like for you to read, 'where to begin'.