Reviews for I Love You
E.m.p.t.y.H.o.r.i.z.o.n chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
Jake, this is really good. THe things that are going on right now are reflected in this poem. I'm sorry you're hurting.
Melanie
Ashley F chapter 1 . 4/2/2004
Wow! I really felt strong emotions in this one. Honestly, improve nothing, keep it as it is! You've captured beautifully the feeling you were rying to convey, and it's perfect! :D