Reviews for No More |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was heartbreaking. |
![]() ![]() This wasn't so good. Who was Josh? A friend or family member? Also, did he rape her or not? This story is like below average and there were parts here and there that didn't even make any sense. You need more detail. |
![]() ![]() ![]() more info- you don't tell us that her mom is sleeping before that, and who is Josh? Brother, boyfriend, family friend...? |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! You had me at the edge of my seat the whole time! (to the mom) PLEASE WAKE UP PLEASE WAKE UP PLEASE WAKE UP!...ok anyways... keep it going |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this, its not the usual smut kind of a rape story, it really makes you feel sorry. You should contiue writing it, I would like to read somemore. (nods) |