Nice!
sorry for lack of awesome review power...

I like it!The imagery and all is nice!

Beautiful, simply beautiful. Love it darling, love it.

Lia

Beautiful :)

Tis a wonderous poem of a wonderous creature, and I give much praise to the inconsistant rhythem, for it makes the progress ragged, just like the image described.

There are so many ways I could comment on this. The narrator is staring at these ashes, and though he knows the phoenix is supposed to rise, I can almost feel a bit of apprehension that she may not; that she will remain cold and lifeless. Hope is a big part of it too... very inspiring, if you think of it long enough. I like that it doesn't rhyme.

~GS

I liked the relation to a phoenix. Phoenixes are god...My favourite lines were 'Can cold ashes give new flame birth?Can fire stir my soul once more?' That was just...AH.

I like this.
See, short!:)
And sincere, honest!:)

An old myth that never is boring. Soon I will start my Legend, and the Phpenix is a large part of it. I say it's a pretty good Poem, reliving the fears a Phoenix may have while waiting to be summoned by the ashes once more.. Good job!

suhweet

Very nice work, anything with the Phoenix i tend to enjoy but this was very well wrote and put together thank you for the great read. : )

Hmm, this is pretty kewl, but it's a bit short, but other than that, it's a good poem, I liked it.
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