Reviews for The Phoenix
MethodlessMadness chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
sorry for lack of awesome review power...
Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
I like it!The imagery and all is nice!
Lia Silverfrond chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Beautiful, simply beautiful. Love it darling, love it.

MageDay chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
Beautiful :)
Soul Effrontery chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Tis a wonderous poem of a wonderous creature, and I give much praise to the inconsistant rhythem, for it makes the progress ragged, just like the image described.
Guinivere Sage chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
There are so many ways I could comment on this. The narrator is staring at these ashes, and though he knows the phoenix is supposed to rise, I can almost feel a bit of apprehension that she may not; that she will remain cold and lifeless. Hope is a big part of it too... very inspiring, if you think of it long enough. I like that it doesn't rhyme.

Ethereal Silver chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
I liked the relation to a phoenix. Phoenixes are god...My favourite lines were 'Can cold ashes give new flame birth?Can fire stir my soul once more?' That was just...AH.
Phoenix-Pen chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
I like this.
See, short!:)
And sincere, honest!:)
sekome chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
An old myth that never is boring. Soon I will start my Legend, and the Phpenix is a large part of it. I say it's a pretty good Poem, reliving the fears a Phoenix may have while waiting to be summoned by the ashes once more.. Good job!
OFKiken88 chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
The Fenix chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
Very nice work, anything with the Phoenix i tend to enjoy but this was very well wrote and put together thank you for the great read. : )
XXXXX XXXX XX XXXX XXXXX XXXXX chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
Hmm, this is pretty kewl, but it's a bit short, but other than that, it's a good poem, I liked it.