Reviews for Love Started with a Funeral
Moz chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
Loved it! Original story and realistic dialogue. Hope you get the top grade you deserve.
M
pen fifteen chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
I absolutely love your short stories (and your longer stories too) but this was perfect. This was too cute. Wonderful job.
Jyna
anonymous chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
i wasn't crazy about the beginning but i got more interested once you began telling about them being kids and by the end, when alec told her not to cry, i loved it. i definitely agree that it's short and sweet. since this is for a grade, i would suggest replacing the "real"'s for example, "real young." however, you may be using that to sound like your character, and i think that it would make sense to do that. i guess it jsut depends on what your teacher prefers. it's good though
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