|Reviews for Childhood and a Window|
| lilleo chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
i like this poem, to me it seems almost unfinished, your mind will wander, but for how long... :)
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
ah this is nice nice new and nice!
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
Today here at the Jersey shore...it is raining. You capture the very essence of the feeling of a rainy day.
| EchoesOfReason chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
It's very much in the pshcye of a child but the writing is of an adult. This was very well written, great imagery and the wording choice is fabulous!
"The rain patchworks its braided path" When I sat for a moment to this about that I could see it and it was amazing! Take care, great job, and good luck!
| lisaslife chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
it seems almost childlike, the way you wrote it, great one!
Your One and Only Fan,